2129: Without Me
Without Me |
![]() Made by: Crazy56U |
Explanation[edit | edit source]
The author writes:[edit | edit source]
Upon seeing the original strip, I came up with two things that could've improved it:
1. It being longer, and it being made clear what Jon's ringtone was.
2. And then I got the idea to listen to some music at 2:30ish AM...
Original strip: 2012-04-02.
Transcript[edit | edit source]
{a cellphone is seen lying on a table, off}
{the phone lights up, someone is calling it}
Ringtone: Now this looks like a job for me
{Jon peeks in from the left, having heard the phone}
Ringtone: So everybody just follow me
{Jon is closer}
Ringtone: 'Cause we need a little controversy
{Jon is reaching for the phone}
Ringtone: 'Cause it feels so empty without-
{suddenly, Garfield pops in to smash the phone with a mallet}
Jon: (surprised, shocked) Hey!
SFX: SMASH
Jon: (pissed) I liked that ringtone!
Garfield: Trust me. The world is a better place.
{apparently, Garfield hates Eminem}