529: Garfield Haiku Part 2

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Garfield Haiku Part 2
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Made by: Dangeresque300


Explanation[edit | edit source]

In the same vein as #1: Garfield in Haiku, this edit rewrites the dialogue to fit the traditional syllable structure of a haiku. Much less was done to get there, however; the only change to the first panel's dialogue is the removal of the word "a"; Jon's third panel dialogue had its contraction expanded, but the word "considered" was removed; and Garfield's dialogue was completely untouched.

The author writes[edit | edit source]

Original strip: 1992-07-22.

Transcript[edit | edit source]

Jon: You may have salad.
Jon: Pork chops are not a salad!
Garfield: I have much to learn.